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 date: '2018-01-10 09:45:00'
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-_(Protocols Not Platforms, Part 2 of 2)_
+_(Protocols Not Platforms - Part 2 of 2)_
 
-Blockchain technology currently has a hype to substance ratio rapidly approaching infinity. And as a team of people who are skeptical of 90+% of proposed blockchain uses, we're hesitant to contribute to that (ed.: wait until you see what I changed the title to).
+Blockchain technology currently has a hype to substance ratio rapidly approaching infinity. And as a team of people who are skeptical of 90+% of proposed blockchain uses, we're hesitant to contribute to that (_ed.: wait until you see what I changed the title to_).
 
 But there's one area where we think it’s plausible, if not likely, that blockchain will improve the world: the development of open standards and protocols, and consequently more user-friendly technology.